5 Tips to Hook Your Readers with Long Copy (and keep `em reading all the way to the end)
Mis-sold PpiI can remember going to my bank in the late 1990s to enquire about a loan for a new car. I`d fell in love with this slinky, silver sports car and being a single male at the time, with plenty of disposable income, I thought I`d treat myself to this flashy kind of motor. The bank eventually approved my loan but I was forced into taking out payment protection insurance at the same time. I`m not sure why I took it out to be honest. I think I felt pressured into taking out the policy because the person whom I spoke at the bank said it strengthen my initial loan application if PPI was in place. Nothing was explained to me about the PPI and how it would cover sickness payments or payments for the loan if I was made redundant. In fact, I think I was
Mis-sold Ppi by the bank and had it not been so long ago I would put a claim in against the bank in question. Over the years countless customers have been
Mis-sold Ppi policies through the banks. Huge profits could be made out of PPIs so you can see why banks would push them onto their customers. Today people are fighting back. Anyone who thinks they might have been
Mis-sold Ppi polices in the past can speak to claims management firms who will take their case on and try to recover as many payments as possible.
Like most solo professionals, you can`t afford to sell yourself with hype.
You want to create a friendly conversation with website visitors so you`ll
attract clients.
But a website that doesn`t attract and hold attention tends to grow
cobwebs. It looks sleepy!
And research shows, over and over, that long copy sells better than
short copy.
So how you do create long messages that don`t set your visitors to
snoozing... or worse, clicking off to a more wide-awake website?
1. Write conversationally.
Let?s face it: web surfers get bored like everybody else. They?re sitting all
alone with their computers and they want to feel somebody cares
enough to talk to them. Reading pages and pages of copy should feel
like getting a letter from a good friend.
Short copy (and short-short ezines) comes across more like a message
left on an answering machine ? not a meaningful connection.
Ever had a phone conversation with a friend or even a business
relationship when you just enjoyed talking?
You were in no hurry to hang up. You were entertained. You felt
affirmed. When readers feel this way, they?ll stay tuned ? all the way to
the bottom of the page.
2. Maintain suspense.
Whether you`re writing website copy or murder mysteries (my favorite
leisure reading), maintain suspense. Each sentence should motivate the
reader to move to the next sentence...and the next paragraph...and the
next page, chapter and even book.
I?m not sure who first applied the term ?bucket brigade? to copy. But
here?s the idea.
Before fire departments got organized, volunteers would fight fires by
lining up and passing buckets of water from the nearest well to whatever
was burning. Another line would pass empty buckets back for refills.
Buckets moved from hand to hand ? fast, no stops.
So think of each idea as a bucket you want to pass along, from one
sentence to the next. Motivate the reader: ?Keep going! Urgent! You
need to reach the end before anything else happens!?
3. Ask, ?Who?s reading?? rather than ?How long??
Your target market really wants to learn what you have to say. They
realize they?ll learn from you, even if you?re overtly making a sales pitch.
So they keep reading....and reading.
What?s your favorite personal interest? Dogs? Cats? Hiking?
Basketball? Soccer? Music? Art? Real estate?
When you?re passionate, you can?t learn enough. You hope the article,
book or talk will go on forever. And if you?ve targeted right, your readers
will feel the same way.
4. Encourage your readers to talk back to you.
Marketing researchers know: When we read any message, we tend to
talk back! Sometimes we speak aloud (and even throw a magazine
across a room ? doesn?t work with a computer).
But most often we engage in what psychologists call ?counter-
arguments.? For example, you read, ?This technique will transform your
cat into an obedient pet who comes when called.?
You think, ?No way!? or, ?You must be kidding.?
We also affirm what we read.
?That?s a great idea!?
?I can save money in the long run!?
And (especially if we?re contemplating a big-ticket item) we?re seeking
more and more reasons to justify our buying decision.
So...you?re probably ahead of me: Longer copy means more
opportunities to say, ?Yes ? it?s for me!?
5. Crawl out on the edge.
What television shows become mega-hits? I should know. I?m somewhat
anti-television. No cable in my home because, ?There are better ways to
spend my time!?
But what do I rent at the video store? You got it: the big HBO and
Showtime series that go outside the networking programming box.
They?re more like indie films than television ? and they attract audiences
of millions. And just try to rent a DVD of past seasons: you get on a
waiting list. (Desperate Housewives? A desperate imitation! Feel free to
email if you disagree.)
Writing works the same way.
Whenever I take a risk with an edgy ezine article, a few readers
unsubscribe and some even send a few grumpy emails. But I always get
a few orders and queries about coaching, too.
When I write reviews for amazon.com, I just say what?s on my mind. And
I get some of my best clients and subscribers.
One reader even said, ?Do they call you Cantankerous Cathy? You
never say anything nice!? But she signed up for my ezine and attended
three teleclasses. At least half a dozen clients claim they hired me
because, they said, ?You tell it like it is!?
Edgy for me means strong opinions and ideas. Some famous
copywriters use strong, colorful language. Adapt your edginess to your
audience and your own style.
Bottom line: As long as you hook the reader, maintain suspense and tell
a good story, your message can be as long as you want it to be.
Cathy Goodwin, Ph.D., is a published author, speaker, copywriter and
business consultant.
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